Chiang Mai: Home Away From Home
Here is my 1st assignment, thank you for any feedback
Your article truly captures more than just the food in Thailand (which is a huuuuge part of the attraction for me :o)
It also hints at all the other things you can do during your visit. Chiang Mai truly sounds like a wonderful place to live!
I like the last line in your first paragraph:
– Time stands still, we live for the moment, postpone plane tickets, and stop.
The only thing that was a little confusing for me on first read was the location of all the places you mentioned. I wasn’t sure if we were in one neighborhood, or if you were taking us through nearby neighborhoods, or if the areas are spread out across the city. I found myself wishing there was a map with the neighborhoods and roads you mentioned highlighted. Or it could just be that I haven’t had any coffee, yet.
Overall, an enjoyable read! Loved the photos, too – bright, clear, and illustrate the ideas in your article.
Great site, really love the design.
You’re a strong writer and I really love your straightforward approach to this assignment…kinda like “this is why I love Chiang Mai.”
You could also definitely turn this into a guide, especially a foodie-based one. Might help keep things organized a little better and give readers a better sense of where you live (like Irene suggested).
Looking forward to reading more!
Hi Irene, Candice,
thank you for your kind words! Point taken with the neighborhoods, and actually yes, adding a little map would be a great thing to do, I have just seen a lovely hand-drawn map on someone else’s blog… I might just nick the idea… but pssst
Thank you again and happy writing,